unsolved






stillness en masse
crochet dreams
out of time

light across your body
sheer in its armour
touching infinity

we a walk on the thin line
hurt accompanies tunes
sung in a city morning

the newspaper read and noted
milk at the front door
heaven a walk away

our hearts still an enigma
unsolved as we turn the page



Poetry by kath
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Written on 2007-03-09 at 07:35

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Damon
I love this piece. I thought that you wrote it really well, yet I did wonder about the second line. Did you leave a t out of croched or do I not know the word?
Damon
2008-09-17


Karen Canning
very beautifully woven, love the ending

huggs
karenxx
2007-03-11


Rob Graber
I tend to think of realism and romantic beauty as more or less opposed; here, as if by magic, you cast the spell of romance using words profoundly realistic. Bravo!
2007-03-09


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hi there KIatherine this is a beautiful poem
and the last tw o line are my fav

our hearts still an enigma
unsolved as we turn the page

your heart though is not an enigma in this this poem is pure unashamed lomging well done rgds Michael
2007-03-09