Heavenly touch . . .



Under the breath of heaven
I was dead and down
under the sky of illusions
I was stroked out

But between of my illusions
I found the answer
that life is to big
to cast away

and I take another breath
and walked away
on my way to heaven
were I will stay



Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2007-03-11 at 14:10

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ardent.March
An interesting poem. I like the mood.
I think it should be life is too big - with 2 o's though.

Under the breath of heaven
I was dead and down
under the sky of illusions
I was stroked out

~ this stanza is amazing
~ I love the title.
I always pay attention to titles, lol.

Language: 5
Format: 5
Mood: 5
Overall: 5
2007-03-25


Phyllis J. Rhodes
Absolutely wonderful! This is filled with promise for times when things look hopeless and too hard.

Language: 5
Format: 5
Mood: 5
Overall: 5
2007-03-22


Karen Canning
very deep written piece, I understand the words so well

huggs
karenxx
2007-03-11


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
*storm of applause*Bravo Dan!I like the sound of this poem ;) *bookmarked*my friend :)
2007-03-11