Love turned to hate.


Love turned to hate.

my world needs to end
all of this misfortune and
all the messages you send
to my heart.
you tear my world apart
taking your sweet time
and not paying for your crime.
cause your killing me.
i dont know how to tell you
im done.
i cry everytime you beat me
i feel like i'm dying slowly as
possible.
i loved you: you were my whole
world.
but now i dont know
all the swearing
and not caring
what you do to me.
i can say i hate you
now.
i'm more than you'll
ever be.




Poetry by Dahani
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Written on 2007-03-12 at 15:20

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broken wings
well made poem talking about the reality of some relationships and the thoughts of it all
2007-03-12


Mitzi
i love the line "i'm more than you'll ever be" !!!.....keep up the wonderful work!!!!.....you have GREAT poems! hope to see more and more soon!.......lata!
M.
2007-03-12


Dominic
This is sincere...which I feel is the hallmark of any good poem. Well done and I hope this works out.
2007-03-12