So.

So. If I just ran away.
away from you and away from this,
away from everything I ever knew.
If I never came back, if I left you behind,
would you care? Would you shed a tear?
Or would you move on and live as you should...



Poetry by Polly
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Written on 2007-03-18 at 16:53

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Autie
I have a poem, which I wrote during 2005, I have not posted it yet that in essence sounds so much liek this. Its the feeling like you're holding things together, only your love counts. Its a sense that maybe just maybe you should leave and never look back.

I really enjoyed it, keep it up. Maybe a little more length and more imagery to add to the sense of pain and sadness or doubt fo teh person feeling this will make it even more effective.

Great Job!

Autie

P.s.: Check out mine :)
2007-03-18