Kiss Of Spring

The kiss of spring
dances on my lips ~
loss of breath it brings,
wet and warm,
it plants seeds over my smile.




Poetry by ardent.March
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Written on 2007-03-19 at 08:38

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
yep, since i like your writing so very much, i have decided to go through all of what you have posted here... well, not all in one night, though lol ;) :)

it plants seeds over my smile is impactful imagery for me to describe the growth of happiness for the season, perhaps the reassurance and lightness is because summer is just not too far away... or simply the white, grey, and slush on the roads - the beauties of winter start to get a bit blah after a while... sure is nice to see bright, warm colors again :) anyway, you've probably noticed i ramble a lot lol all this to say, i really enjoyed... as usual... love the softness coming through in this one :) *hugs* xx
2007-04-14


Rob Graber
Highly original imagery!
2007-03-22


Lavender
Another spring! Where is winter? Here we barely had any at all! And I like winter best, next to autumn. I like your poem, too! Grins.
2007-03-19


salem
wonderful
2007-03-19


Individuality
a new beginning cycles through life and love. forever in motion smiles hatch and fly, wings flapping warmth.

on the season theme, it is freezing lol been warm here for a bit but now it is cold again. snow in many places, perhaps a last burst of winter before spring takes its hold for its time.
2007-03-19