A sonnet


A Gazebo's Magic

Silvery orb beams down an opal hue
While natures' sounds lie still in serene sleep
Whispering gently, love makes its debut
Huddled in our haven, secrets we keep.
Before dawn rises and all are waking
Midst the inky sky we declare our love
Our souls merge, bodies blissfully aching
As stars shower from the heavens above.

In our gazebo, at the garden's end
Beauty lies, bathed in a lover's embrace
Fantasy swirls, blossomed romance ascends
Hovering in dulcet ethereal grace.
In deep twilight we sing our lover's song
In euphoria, all the summer long.




Poetry by Kiran
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Written on 2007-03-21 at 20:05

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aliceramone
this is excellent...such a beautiful sonnet...lovely write filled with passion and romance
2007-04-05



Glorious sonnet and a garden and Gazebo's we all dream of possessing love in one day! Well done, Tai
2007-03-26


salem
it's good poem
2007-03-25


Individuality
ah love, smiling in pleasure as poetry roams hearts and minds whilst nature dances. a good piece.
2007-03-21


ardent.March
Reading it again, i just love it, lol!
Yes, great flow and rhyme to this.
You might want the second to last 'I' capitalized.
2007-03-21


ardent.March
Definitely bookmarking this one!
This is absolutely beautiful!
Fantasy swirls, blossomed romance ascends
Hovering in an ethereal grace.
All wonderful lines and language throughout
this sonnet. A very good sonnet!
I love what you did surrounding a gazebo.
(I saw that contest, lol)
2007-03-21