Bite

tentative weakness wallows judgement
drowning in dignity's decay.
cunning carnal lure's spice rise
freak fetish fantasies.
temptation's shackle
rattlesnakes lure,
bursts purple
twisted
bite.



Poetry by aliceramone
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Written on 2007-03-23 at 03:07

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ardent.March
Love this,
Yes, you alliterate well,
freak fetish fantasies.
~ like that line!:)
2007-03-31


RedAquarius
An excellent nonet coupled with your usual knack for alliteration, I'm glad I found this one!
2007-03-27


Individuality
i have not seen this form for awhile, you use your alliterative style well here. it makes me think of booze! snakebite. i must have been sober for too long.
2007-03-23