today tomorrow and forever

TODAY , TOMORROW AND FOREEVER.....

There is not a single day
I could stay in peace.
The forgotten moments
Again come back and tease.


I holded your hands
To cross all hurdles and thorns
But the moments shared with u
Are no less than pricking horns.



See the bond of sun n moon
Do they ever depart?
One shines to scatter
While other gathers the part.



Feelings are flow of emotions
I can't stop it;how hard I try
But can stop writing
Before the pen goes dry.



Poetry by swati
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Written on 2007-03-24 at 10:35

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V.V.Ramesh
superb swati.. awesome and well written..:)
2008-03-05


Individuality
held would sound and flow much better here than holded.
perhaps saying you rather than u? also sun and moon rather than sun n moon?
cant - can't
it.how - maybe a comma here rather than a fullstop/period?
a good piece, maybe a little editing to help with the flow :)
2007-03-24