after talking to Nepenthes ... who today 25/3 posted the poem "a sort of Haiku" telling how to write a classical Haiku ... I have now learned how ... this is my try .. Thank you Nepenthes :)


... a try for haiku .....:)





the darkness subsides
dew drop in untouched stillness
delight of bird song



Haiku by kath
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Written on 2007-03-25 at 08:25

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M Heathcote
Very beautiful well done!
L2 though needs one syllable less though
to complete the 5/7/5
try this?

the darkness subsides
dew drop stillness--untouched
delight of bird song
2007-03-26


Kathy Lockhart
this is so pretty. it fresh and light and full of hope
2007-03-26


Karen Canning
this is really beautiful and very descriptive

huggs
karenxx
2007-03-25


salem
wow,beautiful
2007-03-25