Sweet Dreamland

In depths I fly, awake, I fall in him
And dance on lines and linen's soft embrace,
Into his dreams and sighs, as night goes dim.

I feel his light, he fills my passion's whim --
My dreamland smiles I cast upon his face
In depths I fly, awake, I fall in him.

We dive through deep affections, there we swim
And hold each other near, I send my grace
Into his dreams and sighs, as night goes dim.

His love will grip me now where once I'd skim
And give me wings of thought that I can trace
In depths I fly, awake, I fall in him.

Upon his head, a pillow, sweet, I trim
With all my love, my fears and pain erase
Into his dreams and sighs, as night goes dim.

Here, in my dreams, I find the tallest limb
To skip across, then soar through empty space
In depths I fly, awake, I fall in him,
Into his dreams and sighs, as night goes dim.



Poetry by ardent.March
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Written on 2007-03-27 at 08:28

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
oh form poetry... is it the triolet? i don't know what's up with me these days but my memory for names is really suffering... :/ but regardless my memory blank, this just blows my mind... the feeling really is dreamy... i always find repetition adds to a text like this, the emotions are beautiful, the effect as mesmerizing... sincerely well written... thanks for sharing, really excellent to read... :f :) *hugs* xx
2007-03-29


Rob Graber
Beautifully crafted!
2007-03-28


Individuality
ah sweet dreamland, where love basks in the sleepy colours that swirl, a good piece here. though in the last verse you alter 'in depths' to 'to depths'!
2007-03-27