Dreams

Dreams are the visions and
Desires of our minds, we
Drape ourselves in fancy,
Drenched imagination,
Drawing blueprints of choice
Days... manifestations
Designed by our bare souls.




Poetry by ardent.March
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Written on 2007-03-27 at 17:39

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Lavender
Ah, I admire this so much!! May I please post it on Poetry Planet?? It is lovely!
2007-04-02


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
striking flow for me this one... very nicely done, indeed :) dreams... they are to us what energizer batteries do to the bunny hehe ;) life and love wouldn't be driven forward without dreams i don't think... my thoughts :) lovely poem... *hugs* xx
2007-03-29


Individuality
a good little form this, like with all the small forms i personally think they read nicer in chains or incorporated with another form. saying that though they still are pretty nifty as singular pieces. perhaps a comma after choice? dreams - spiralling round the mind as we venture forth.
2007-03-27