Three's a fantasy


I hear three people in my bed,
My sighs, your screams, a poet man -
His words, they echo in my head,
I hear three people in my bed.
I taste their pleasures, I am fed
By two men, one near, one I span,
I hear three people in my bed,
"My sighs, your screams!" -a poet man.



Poetry by ardent.March
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Written on 2007-03-29 at 04:27

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aliceramone
lovely flow... sensual...cool form...well done
2007-03-31


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
ha, yes... the triolet... i'm right this time... well, i know you told me last night... but hehe... i did write two of these, the only form poetry i ever managed lol :) but for the fantasy, personally, 3 is too many lol ;) don't mind me, it's morning :D a beautiful form here again... really liked where this sent my thoughts... i'll spare you the details, though lol ;) :) *hugs* xx
2007-03-29


Individuality
poetry slips in with ease as wisps of dreams fall to their knees, wet smiles applaud in passion's seas while wild fire screams ride the breeze.
2007-03-29


Rob Graber
Most refreshing in its originality!
2007-03-29