could I




and could I
just once
touch
the sweetness of you

in a night
where time is free
keeping secrets

close to the heart
and letting no one near

oh could I just once
touch you in your dreams
as morning wakes

then I would let time loose again




Poetry by kath
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Written on 2007-04-01 at 19:10

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Kathy Lockhart
yes I agree with Rob this is a beautiful poem. Your words glide across the page like ice melting leaving traces of your heart along the way. I felt the sweetness, the pure honest love of this piece.
2007-04-03


Rob Graber
Such a beautiful poem!

PS: I bet you're disappointed I didn't spot some little thing or two to fix... ;-,?
2007-04-03


betsy Firefly
Very gentle, real to the core, Kath!
2007-04-03


Peter Humphreys The PoetBay support member heart!
O to hold time captive in such moments instead of being held captive to time ... this is a beautiful, wistful, poetic dream.
2007-04-02


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
beautiful images are you Katherine

Could I but once just hold you
Until the evening of me has gone
Could I but once just kiss you
Since you are the only one
That could save my soul
From the desolation
Of you not loving me

thats what i see Katherine
forgive me but i do feel the desolation
in any lost love

well done rgds Michael
2007-04-02


salem
awesome&romantic poem
i loved the words
it's truly beautiful
thanx
2007-04-02



Yes you could and probably do kath, or will do with this beautifully tentative poem on overcoming fear. Smiling at you, Tai
2007-04-01