Challenge to you who read this: write the opposite text! so we can se that the hope still lives..


We are lost

Crusified servants of undefined despair
descends in your heart
can`t trust destiny

Suffering prince of damnations and hate
breathes the consuming flame
deprived desires

As hate breathes within dark souls
and consumes our hopes

We are lost

Consuming our very self to breathe
through damnation and unholy desires

We are lost





Poetry by Cr4Ky
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Written on 2007-04-01 at 23:32

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I love yours, and I love a challenge. Did you have something like this in mind? Smiling at you, winking....Tai

We are free

Blessed children in our glorious journey
The transcending of truth,
Is our Liberty

This earth our Kingdom of love
We relate in preserving the flame.
Never to be deprived again.

As hate is consumed by loving bloom,
We reach for the stars. We touch the moon.

We are free
2007-04-03


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
Great poem, your
words really capture
all the despair of
hopelessness.

I will answer
your challenge :)

L.
2007-04-02