His Smile Slides Down Ribbons

His smile slides down ribbons
That dance within her hair,
She feels a sudden pulling of
Her heart -- he does ensnare.

He pins a corsage to her soul
With flower blooms that swirl,
Fastened there forever more,
The petals will not curl.

She saves a man from wandering
Throughout his life alone,
She adorns his heart and soul,
Her love gives him a throne.



Poetry by ardent.March
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Written on 2007-04-04 at 09:45

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
this is sincerely my definition of poetry... so very beautiful... i find the imagery gentle, it carries a feeling of absolute comfort and contentment for me... just the title created pleasant thoughts for me... the rest felt like bliss for the mind hehe :) so good to read... *hugs* xx
2007-04-08


Lavender
A message well understood and greatly appreciated! Soft touches and embraces are kindly given and received, I am sure! Smiling here! A beauty of a poem!
2007-04-06


Rob Graber
What a fine poem! The imagery is original, apt, and unforgettable!
2007-04-04


Individuality
a good piece here, lovely flow. the wanderer, that is how i feel, just moving from place to place, alone.
2007-04-04