ok: "this is the result of a co-work between me and Lilly, during several hours spent together" what a great moment i lived


angelic kiss

my soul was kissed by a virgin angel with a bleeding heart
and no deity can tell its secret whispers
my eyes have been touched by the feathers from its wings
my sense is shy by its soft eyes looks
i float in heavens on its sighs
i became a slave for the joy to learn its pleasure
what cuffs would be more suitable for my soul than its whispers?
what melody would last more than its moans of love?




Poetry by salem
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Written on 2007-04-05 at 12:01

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
a lulling, gentle flow to this... very beautiful, saying more wouldn't fit... "what cuffs would be more suitable for my soul than its whispers?" - a very nice image... lovely read... :) *hugs* xx
2007-04-08


betsy Firefly
Interesting.
2007-04-07


Kathy Lockhart
These soft, pure, love words are beautifully woven together by the two of you to produce this poem that caresses the soul. Lovely
2007-04-05


yoonoos peerbocus
what is carnal is brought at cosmic level- a good piece
2007-04-05