Ponds Reflect


Koi, like orange streamers,
Kites of color, gliding,
Kindled embers, glowing,
Kimono flowers, bright,
Kaki foliage, deep,
Kaleidoscope fish that
Kiss the sky's reflection.



Poetry by ardent.March
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Written on 2007-04-07 at 11:20

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M Heathcote
nice poem this one
reminds me of the haiku
form of poetry
there at the very end!
well done. :)
2007-05-04


Rob Graber
Nice! And the final line is just sublime!
2007-04-07


Amanda K
that's very smart and clever.

keep it up
2007-04-07


Individuality
can we throw them on some bread and make a butty, i am starving :D seriously, a good piece, a lot can be said in a short poem and the words swim through sparkles here.
2007-04-07