and I miss you





softness and love
I cling to the memory
taking one step at the time

wishing come true
a story I tell
when days hurt

flakes of time
shift and paint yesterday
in a colour remembered

gardens blooming
ice fringed petals
a scent of passion

woven in a yarn we spun
as love stopped by our door
and I miss you still



Poetry by kath
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Written on 2007-04-28 at 06:32

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lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
woven in a yarn we spun
as love stopped by our door
and I miss you still

this stanza make the poem complete you have the knack of finding beautyt unbounded
well done rgds mike
2007-04-29


Peter Humphreys
I find the last two stanzas especially fine: the image of our lives weaving love as flowers by our own hands. A delicate, tender, reflective poem.
2007-04-28


Kathy Lockhart
Kath this is a tapestry of images and feelings beautifully woven together by the eloquence of your pen.
2007-04-28