F.i.in.e Moods
"to be or not to be, is not a question anymore, I am" - for me, that line is the core of the positivity expressed here... very uplifting and soft invitation to live life's beauties and take aside the parts that were not so beautiful... my interpretation :)

the writing is good... just a very minor observation to offer... the poem begins "Where my soul is, there's my home" with an apostrophe between 'there' and 'is'... and in next lines, no apostrophe is used ("...there is a place for me", "I am there too", "I am in the middle")... it's usually recommended to use the same style throughout the whole text... :)

bookmarking this for the smiles it brings - like a spring breeze bringing back life... it's very beautiful :)

*hugs* xx
2007-05-03

amandeep
very nice and very joyful poem. i liked it very much. i think all the people'll go with you on this beautiful, interesting and full of joy trip.

the mood of this poem is an excellent. i liked it very much. this poem lend smile on the beautiful face of poets.

thanks.

Aman

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2007-05-03

Elle
This is a wonderful journey Dan - wouldn't it be just great not to lug that heavy baggage around?

Elle x
2007-05-03

i'll join you for this trip...:) sounds like fun, and i'm in for everything that it involves :D.
Lilly xxx

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2007-05-03