as you form





I still search the dark
reaching out
for golden lights
found in moments
entwining me
as you form
and evaporate
slowly in the light
returning



Poetry by kath
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Written on 2007-05-12 at 20:29

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Peter Humphreys
Mysterious presences, will o' the wisp experiences, ethereal moments, past presents past, the silken illusion of morning mist, dawning fog on the mountain ... images and thoughts that come to mind on reading this haunting poem.
2007-05-13


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
I too find this piece so evocative of mysterios
ethereal forms coming out of a mist maybe an autumnal mist that speaks of the sorrow of love as yet unfound well done katherine for your imagery

rgds michael
2007-05-12


Rob Graber
Wow, I find this attractively mystical...
2007-05-12