Tell me when . . .

did
I
leave
my sorrows
flew high
up to the sky
where I kissed
 the stars

tell me when
did I land again
crashed to the ground

and flew back again
 to the sky
where I belong to

Tell me why
the sky became my limit
and I will tell you when
the world became my oyster
and I it's pearl

Tell me when and I will tell why

Why when I crash to the ground
I fly again

Tell me when and I will tell why
But now it's time for me to fly

and Rewrite once again
the fairy tale of my life

so my friend
once upon a time I met you
and we flew high up to the sky
where we kissed the stars

Do you remember?

 





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Written on 2007-05-20 at 12:24

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Amanda K
I really loved this great write.
2007-06-08


binesh
Beautiful as a portrait. . I like the work so much..

But dear, never possess the soul of Night for it is so Dark Embrace the Soul of a Springtime.........
2007-05-20


V.V.Ramesh
very good my dear frnd:)
nice written
Rate:5
2007-05-20


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
this made me feel like a journey to self rediscovery... bringing the self back to where it was good... love the references to flying high, makes me think of eagles (which i associate to freedom and majestic beauty) soaring high in the sky, kissing the stars (which i associate to the vast cosmos, dreams, and all of what Man hasn't mapped) where limitless possibilities are available... that's where all of your words send me this morning... the voice won't accept the good course to be terminated and forgotten... empowering and encouraging is the feeling i get... thanks for this, been missing your writing :f *hugs* xx
2007-05-20