Solitude....


Release my heart from the pain
of your final words,
tormenting my broken soul.
Your passion parting farewell.
My love rejected.
My life exhausted.

Each day I had searched for faith,
longing to find a reason
to carry myself forward.
Emptiness fills my core.
My feelings are hollow.

I stand here alone
still holding this rose,
your last gift to me.
My soul slowly dying.

Days grow dark and cold
where the sun once shone.
Misery pierces my flesh.
my haggard body weakened,
my spirit rising, destine
to live in solitude.




Poetry by TeeTee
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Written on 2007-05-21 at 20:28

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David L Wright
A very melancholy write and reflects the pain one would feel under the circumstance. A friend of mine calls work like this "Angst Poetry." Happy trails.
2008-02-03


David L Wright
A very melancholy write and reflects the pain one would feel under the circumstance. A friend of mine calls work like this "Angst Poetry." Happy trails.
2008-02-03


Zoya Zaidi
Yeah,
A lost love,
Betrayed love,
Leaves you so empty,
So drained, so lonely,
In solitude you live for a while,
'Till new hope emerges, new life begins...
For life goes on ...it must go on...it has to go on...

(((Hugs)))
You are a pleasant discovery!
Love, Zoya
2007-05-26


Amanda K
a very good poem,dear.you did add many great images and beautiful feelings.

love,
2007-05-23


Gopi
wow its a beautiful piece. A soul in solitude. Creation takes place in solitude ,Tete. A great poetry comes out of great solitude. Even if everything is gone, hope always remains with you. Hope is the most intimate friend of our life. Isnt it?
2007-05-21


Will
Masterfully Expressed but your solitude is Over Dollface LOL...

Love the way this is written...
2007-05-21