written on nov. 17.05 (just thoughts)


what happened

i expose my soul to you
never thought this'd happen...never
but it did, and now you're gone
you told me you'd never go
you told me you'd never leave
you gave me your word
what good was that?
you told me you loved me
you told me you wished to spend the
rest of your life with me
so what happened?

will i ever know why you upped
and left?

do i really want to know?

sigh...who are you?
thief who stole my heart, my life,
my will to love...
i will never be the same again. ~



Poetry by strangelady13
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Written on 2005-11-20 at 20:15

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GB
Have to agree with ALL said below .... Won't go on but this was great ... a read that touched my heart , in more ways then one ..... Well done ! ......... Glen ( GB )
2006-02-07


BlueyedSoul
I liked this one, I guess because i can identify so closely to the pain of a rejection. To expose your soul is a precious thing..to have it tossed aside is heartbreadking....but like Zoya said, we all ask why me? Its ok...this is life and in our hurt we grow and learn. Here's the good news...our hearts do heal in time. I loved your open expression of heart and soul.

~BlueyedSoul
2005-12-07


Zoya Zaidi
life!life!life!
it asways throws those question at you?
what happened?
why it happened?
why it happened to me?
Iwas true,
igave all !
in all honesty!
AND YET...
No body knows answers to those questions...
As we mone on in life,
LIFE TEACHES US...
tells the meaning of those words...
Those questions...
Which we always ask...

Am I making sense...
I guess, I am not?
What Iam TRYING TO TELL YOU IS:
DON'T FRET, It will pass...
(((Hugs)))
2005-11-21


blackestdaze
the very nature of humanity means we let each other down, and often

sad but true :(

expressive write, with strong feeling coming through, well done
2005-11-21


Nathalia
I must say, I really like your writing style. It flows well!
2005-11-21