I keep forgetting things......


brain

please,
please return my thoughts
for I
have put
a lot of
thought
into them

some
I've written down
others
thrown away

but mostly
forgotton
please
let
some
happy
nice
meaningful thoughts
see
the day



Poetry by pettyodd
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Written on 2005-11-21 at 17:32

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penfold18
Simple and to the point very good, i once read of someone having a memory span of 30 seconds and that broke my heart it just seemed so awful :-)
2005-11-21


John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
Is it meant to be 'please' or pleas?

If 'pleas - why use this poetic law to create that word? - Just interested, good poem no doubt.
2005-11-21