simply



so if I would
write you a letter
free from my mind
it would simply read

love is a mystery
and I am caught
in its shadow

where dancing memories
act a play I once knew

so cold as winter - frozen
waiting in the background
for their lines

knowing they will never come



Poetry by kath
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Written on 2007-05-27 at 21:05

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John Ashleigh
"love is a mystery
and I am caught
in its shadow" -- Again I can't express the powerfull metaphorical terms towards this poem, so expressing to your audience. Just brilliant, keep writing.
2007-06-11


Rob Graber
Imagery strong & memorable: memories as frozen actors who know their lines will never come... beautifully reminiscent of Keats' "Grecian Urn" ode...
2007-05-28