Last First Kiss

Do you remember

when we were just kids

and life seemed so simple

and friends were all we ever had.

these thoughts make me want to break the clock of life

the hands of time never move again

and be your last first kiss

that you'll ever have.

your last first love

youre last first kiss

 

 

 





Poetry by Valerie
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Written on 2007-05-28 at 06:22

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Kathy Lockhart
sweet words of love tenderly written with a touch of sadness.
2007-05-30


Rob Graber
"Last first kiss"--great poetic conception!
PS: Doesn't the last line need "your" rather than "youre"?
2007-05-28


Phyllis J. Rhodes
This is nothing short of brilliant! It makes me want to do just exactly what you said! Only I'd have to wind the clock backwards many years before stopping it. Some little boy was pushing me on a swing, I think I was 7 and when I swung back toward him I was leaning way back and he quickly kissed me smack on the mouth! I think his name was Benny. I jumped out of the swing and ran to the drinking fountain and got a drink real quick to wash out my mouth. I was so nervous. I though I might have a baby by the same time tomorrow!
2007-05-28


nature
its beautifull VAL KEEP WRITING
2007-05-28


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
and i thought i was the romantic poet here i will have to watch out you arestealing my thunder well done young lady its beasutiful rgds Mike
2007-05-28