For my friend Kelly


In The Rain

Theres something about a rainy day that makes my spirit rise

When the clouds with tattered faces appear and seize the skies

Each raindrop a reminder to my every playful past

I wish the refreshing feeling would forever last

Days when life was just too hard to bear

A feeling like one would even dare to care

I would take my heavy heart to the clouds above

And pray they'd shower my pain in waves of pure love

The rain like a gift from the depths of my mind

Ive found a medium that will help my soul unwind

To immerse myself in the emotion of the rain

Is a memory dear to me that I hope will come again





Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2007-06-03 at 17:56

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nature
As always you capture emotion in your lines
and thats what makes your work worth reading
keep it up
2007-06-04


Saga
A great soul wrote this one.

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2007-06-04


gills
Written so well -loved this gills

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2007-06-04


Zoya Zaidi
This is so poetic and the mataphor rain and clouds is so charming Cool!
(((Hugs)))
Love, Zoya

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2007-06-03