Turn Around

You called my name

said Hey I know you well

But i didn't turn around

Couldn't turn around

Turn around

Never turned around

After all the times you called

to me

I left my back

to face you beauty

But I never turned around

Its time to turn around

Turn around

Time to turn around

turn around

and say Hey

I want to know you

a whole new way

and your already turned around

already turned around

turned around

to see my face





Poetry by Valerie
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Written on 2007-06-07 at 22:15

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Indeed an amazing poem! You play with words in a magic way!
2007-06-09


Phyllis J. Rhodes
This is great! It's enticing, and pulls the reader into the words. I can see double meaning about who is the one turning around and the one calling out for that one to turn around. You have a message here that can be taken very seriously or it can be a young girl/ boy love story. It could even be drugs or sex or playing their games with their would be prey. This is an amazing poem Granddaughter. Love you, Mammy
2007-06-08


V.V.Ramesh
wow well written about turn around:)
2007-06-08