Dejavu

Slumber;deep slumber
I slipped into;
Seeing that dove fly
High above the ageless sky;
I knew,
I had seen that dove
On the eternal clouds above;
And as the sun shone bright
On my fungus-ridden memories in delight;
I knew,
I had been there
Which are now memories bare.

I knew;
Sometime long ago,
I had heard the same wind whisper
I had relaxed under the sky sombre
And watched the clouds so amber;
When i knew,
I was about to wake up from slumber.




Poetry by suraj
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Written on 2007-06-12 at 12:26

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Loved reading this poem! It has a really good flow... And everything seems put together real well.
Great work!
Sally
2007-06-20


kid
Good poem i love the ryhmes and inserting a little theme about love makes it perfect
2007-06-12


John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
Vivid dreams and vivid life, so apart yet so near. A good write here.
2007-06-12