based on a quote by tom clancy...


dream

who are you
to become a part of my dream
are dreams not the only substantial part in life
because they can not be altered nor denied?
so are you sure you want to be a a apart of me
to truly see the inner me,
without any perception of the future
think not of yesterday, nor tomorrow, just today.
Today is true, yet answer me
is my dream becoming reality?
Reality means alteration
Does my dream lose perfection?
or is perfection alteration
you are alterating me
and bringing perfection out of me
and to tell the truth
it scares the shit out of me!





Poetry by one of many
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Written on 2007-06-12 at 20:28

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suraj
just an impeccable blend of thoughts and rythm...
2007-07-11


kaashif
love this poem, nice quote
2007-06-15


Lea Foverskov
wow! playing on the distinction between reality and dream that hardly exists - between perfection and alteration. afraid of change - but remember change can be for the better! great piece, i love your rhythm and flow
2007-06-12