Zoya Zaidi
And as the day is done
The dun night descends
Slowly overtakes
the light of the day
The shadows cool the garish
Brightness of the Sun,
As the world slumber
and waits for the renewed day...

Lovely musings on the twilight, dear soul sister!
((Hugs))
Love, Zoya
2007-11-18

Phyllis J. Rhodes
When has anyone written better?
When??????
2007-10-11

Rob Taylor
Kathy, there is no one like you...thank the gods for you. You are a genius when it comes to imagery!
2007-10-05

Will
As I've said so many times Kathy when it comes to diversity and complete writing Ability in Expression, etc YOU ARE IN LEAGUE OF YOUR OWN!!!!
2007-09-25

Winston Latanafrancia Soldevilla
It feels like heaven reading your line of thoughts. The title speaks for itself. A great contrast of words to ponder upon.

"a time of death and life"
"in this quiet moment between
tomorrow and yesterday
creation breathes
a pastel of peace crosses the sky"

You have made the right decision to let the words stay as it is. I say It flows naturally. Splendid!
2007-09-25

lastromantichero
and my gentle lady I love you xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxylk
2007-09-23

lastromantichero
Katherine this is a beautiful expose of the moment twilight takes the world into the peace of its sunsets and you my gentle lady have captured it beautiful i guess thats because yoou sweetheart are serenity itself, you are a gentle peace and I am at peace in your beauty xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxylk Michael
2007-09-23

Coolaaron88
Ah the Twilight, a wonderful poetic topic. I simply enjoyed your attention to explaining the feeling of bliss and content in your words that subdue the mind into euphoria. Thanks Kathy for this breath taking experience.

~Aaron Rowe
2007-09-23