Unretainable

Do what you want

And go were you must

But i won't be far behind

I plan to fall in love

ANd hold nothing back

Say what you need

And feel what you think

But to fall in loveAnd hold nothing back

Such a blessing with you





Poetry by Valerie
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Written on 2007-06-24 at 06:26

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Phyllis J. Rhodes
Yes, this does sound like a hit song! I love it! Your talent shines through these words and the story it tells. Mammy
2007-06-25


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
This is indeed a lyric to a song and you write so well you will be a poet of note some day

rgds mike
2007-06-24


whisperinvoiz
with a few touches, u'll make a hit song from this piece. i just love it . hey! Vale i like ur poetic mind.
jesse ( my real name).
2007-06-24