man of remorse

man of remorse
fell off his horse
his pride, injured in the fall

full of regret
soaked in sweat
no reason to get up at all

all of his fear
he drowns in beer
a river of sin down his throat

self pity, so sick
his head, so thick
he hides it under his coat

so full of lies
nobody cries
we all see through him

so man of remorse
get back on your horse
theres land ahead,
swim




Poetry by pettyodd
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Written on 2005-11-25 at 13:53

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penfold18
I really liked this, its put together so well, making the message crystal clear,keep it up :-)
2005-11-25