we are damaged, you and I

we are damaged, you and I

in different directions, different extremes

your red consists of escape routes
shortlived but strong emotions
in constant change

my red consists of lasting
a main thread of safety
who creates our strength

we are damaged, you and I

differences
plus and minus
yin and yang
you and I


faraway, so close



Poetry by Daybreaker
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Written on 2005-11-26 at 00:36

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BlueyedSoul
The sad reality of a relationship torn in two....you captured this in such vivid detail.
I enjoyed this and appreciated the sentiment you expressed in this piece.

~BlueyedSoul
2005-11-26