Stars



The eyes' deep wells
observes the night sky
the stars glisten in my eyes
falls over cosmos black roof

one crackling and twinkling attitude

with view against the unknown
with this overwhelming panorama
as takes us where the dreams carries

What you don't know can become true

but I sit of course here
and watching stars
with a coffee-cup
and the future carries


The eternity in our arms

and all I am doing
is just to sit here
and watching
stars

 

 

 

 





Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2007-07-14 at 10:18

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sabereh lotfian
Wow! the image in your mind is so very well portrayed here!
And how very simple the cosmos is a black roof here! and your words are glistening in my eyes more than your stras!

I love the poetic mind here:)
Sabereh

P.S. I think you misspelled watching in the last line Dan:D

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