Sometimes I feel this way... This poem is a reflection of my inner side, my thoughts, and how I feel when I'm down.


Just a dream

In the hours of darkness
When I feel alone
There's a bottle of emptiness
Where no pain has gone

It burns like a living hell
I can't breath
No one hear when I ring the bell
I just fall into the deep

The air is choking me
In great pain I scream
Slowly I fall into the sea
This is just a dream

I woke up with tears in my face
I long for the green meadows
A place so full of grace
But all is just deep shadows




Poetry by Tina
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Written on 2005-11-30 at 14:24

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penfold18
Sounds more of a nightmare of a dream to me but well written and the flow is good keep it up :-)
2005-11-30