Vacation Girl



I saw her standing by the Sea

in a photograph

the eastern Sun was shining in her hair

this line doesn't rhyme with the first but should {you see?}

She wore her smile, Beautifully

so sweet in the Summer sand

beside those ancient buildings of her land

she stood like a flowering dream in the light

which cast it's spell upon the image she portrayed

my heart betrayed itself I must confess

somehow she stayed with me somewhere

I saw her in my room, (felt her in my arms, in my bed)

she let her hair flow over my skin the words I read again

so soft and smooth and good

I pictured in her neighborhood

by an Eastern Sea she stood...








Poetry by fyodr
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Written on 2007-08-15 at 20:52

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ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Well wrote , forchently poetry dus not have 2 be precise thes days. if u r cosernde try '' the sun shies upon her hair or '' the sun shines upon and throe her hair i think the 1st maybe beter , :)

All the best keep writing plesase.

Ken ( D Williams)
2007-08-15