THE FOCUS BETWEEN YOU AND ME


To balance the focus between you and me
is not as easy as I'd wish it to be.
We both have our troubles,to fight and explore.
Standing on different sides of the door.

I want you so badly that I forget my own worth.
I've been diminishing myself ever since birth.
Smaller and smaller until I vanish into air.
Egolovers feeling good, it's so not fair.

I give you my time, will you give me yours?
Let's share the laughters and the bores.
Try to balance the focus between you and me.
And eventually we will both be free!



Poetry by Daybreaker
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Written on 2007-08-18 at 00:03

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I love this honest to goodness chat my friend, and I love you for expressing my thoughts exactly, but then, that is what I love about poetry and poets! lol we speak the language of the heart, that is what Art is about and will be, till this earth we depart! and for the love of rhyme.....lets hope, to keep these prosers at bay, for a very long time! smiling at you, a little pished and lost at sea, but calm waters, I am advised are ahead!lol sorry for being crptically ~ Tai tonight. Great romantic poem, so it's your fault....x
2008-08-16


Phyllis J. Rhodes
There is so much wisdom in these ringing words. Well done!
2008-08-12



You write the key to being forever happy my friend! loved it and think it should be every prospective lovers compulsory read. Smiling at you, Tai
2007-08-18