My tiny little world

Overrun

By
You
And by me

By all I thought
I believed in

I don't know anymore
I was so certain

I was so sure

I don't know
Not sure I want to
Either

Want to feel
You

TIME
Is on our side



Poetry by Dalmore
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Written on 2007-08-18 at 13:00

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ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
some times it is our selfs we are left with . then we have to decide to be strong and get on and savive. Or to be weak and lay down and give up. A good poem well writetan. A good poem is one that courses a reponse :)

Ken
2007-08-18


Kathy Lockhart
this ticks like a clock, the rhythm i mean. :)
I also like the small word usage and short line structure.
It is a visual of the message.
This is well done. I really enjoyed reading it.
2007-08-18