THE GHOST OF J


There's something in between us,
in the midst of our sweet love.
You and me, it's plain to see,
a gift from up above.

There's a ghost with a child,
darkening our good view.
Though you say: "Come what may!",
it'll be hard to live it through.

There's a bond to the child,
and to the ghost for sure.
You've been through a lot,
it's hard to ignore.

There's a love left to liberate,
to set free from it's chains.
But I have a hard time
to reconcile with the remains.

You and me, it's plain to see,
a gift from up above.
But there's a ghost with a child,
in the midst of our sweet love.



Poetry by Daybreaker
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Written on 2007-08-22 at 00:02

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Kathy Lockhart
captivating in its emotional turbulence.
2007-08-24


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
Pure "Daybreaker" twisting the turmoil of emotions so well.

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2007-08-24



I love the way you rhyme, a true poet imo and your poem flows beautifully. All I can say about J is, we should all keep our inner child safe and always remember to love them to keep them safe in our hearts. Smiling at you, Tai

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2007-08-22