I Can't write....

I lost my talent

My life

My inspiration

I used to breath your love

Like birds breath the air above

I used to embrace you

And

Fly

So high

I can touch the sky....

But now

Im so down

Depressed

Like

I am dying soon

I wish i die...

I see blood around

I can see me buried

Six feet underground...

Im not a poet

Im not a writer

Im a loner

Lived a loner

And

DIE

A

LONER...




~AHMED


~MAX


September 7th 2007




Poetry by maxmedo
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Written on 2007-09-07 at 00:01

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Hagzissa
The talent and the words are there.... being a poet is reaching out, touching the audience. That's what you're doing here, reaching the audience. Well written indeed.
2007-09-07


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
But you are writing Max, sadness overtakes this piece, yet it is writing and beautiful and reaching out. I hope your pain will ease

Elle x
2007-09-07


Kathy Lockhart
your sadness touches my heart. I hope you find peace. Your poetry is still inside you.
2007-09-07