Pressure

Can you tell me where the time went

Can you tell me if it was well spent

I fear I may break

I may not take it

I can feel the pressure

As the space between lessens

Youre better off

Without me now

Now that Im losing hope

I have to let you know

Im sitting by myself

I can feel the pressure

Its getting closer now

Youre better off without me now





Poetry by Valerie
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Written on 2007-09-16 at 19:29

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Phyllis J. Rhodes
This is intriguing. I want to know more about this situation. Tell me what is behind this poem. You have my full attention and I want to know the who, what, when, where and why. I sense a saddness and regret and a longing. Someone is losing hope. There is so much here. This is great poetry.
2007-09-17