Get a life,

I say get a life, because you can't have mine
Don't threaten me, cos I'm doing just fine.

I won't be blackmailed, nailed to the floor
I've seen the look and I know the score.

You're a freak who is out of control and
sometimes the meek do become bold.

So break my heart, it will heal again
because love like this can only maim

Go get your life, leave mine alone,
I'm telling you baby, you can't atone.

A wrong is a wrong and never a right
perhaps you forgot, or just lost sight.







Poetry by Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-09-17 at 09:23

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NicholasG
This is one for the ages...
2010-12-14



I loved it from the moment I read the title!
Power to the WOMEN!!!Great great!!! I really like the ending its wonderful. I havent been in a relationship like that, but I have been close to people in them, and I wish they would send the freak packing!!! I should have them read this!!! LOL
Great write!!!
Sally
2008-02-01


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
the feeling here made me think of something i've written in the past:

i don't mind giving a hand
just as long as it doesn't cut it

some relationships need to be imposed a halt 'cause of one side's excesses and going over the lines of acceptable... this is what i feel from the words: "enough is enough, it ends here" ... gaining back what was taken and not fearing doing so... i love this one for the strength: assertion is very empowering... i enjoyed the rhyming as well, complemented the impact of the emotions expressed i find... *hugs* xx
2007-09-20



A very well expressed text that irradiates great strength and dignity, Elle!
2007-09-18


moon smile
Wow,wow,.......... your words are so touchable ,it embrace the agony of love ,when the struggle is set between your love and your dignity, i wrote a poem of the same meanings "Losten love'', i hope you read it.
2007-09-18


maxmedo
WOW WOW WOW
SLOW DOWN hehe
i take this poem very seriously especially if u knew Martial Arts, hehe
I must be catuous from women yeah:D
lol

Liked it so much, i usually like poems where the writer acts in anger from a pian or agony, i like how you defended your life and fought for your indepency in your life. I could use your poem against some poeple i know too, hey GET A LIFE it will work belive me, it lifted me when i was down thnx...ive seen the look and i know the score this line is now written on my door hehe..

~MAX
2007-09-17



I agree with cindy, this is a greatly empowering write, I can tell by the language that it is written with passion and a hot temper, which does a poet no harm at all from time to time. That is the problem with folk that don't have lives, they try to break yours down so they feel better about themselves. Fuck that for a game of soldiers Elle!lol You tell em girl...love it love it love it. Tai
2007-09-17