Slow awakening



The morning exudes
Torpor drunk can points
The satin bed

 

The coffee maker
Aromatic beans
Running water

 

Marmalade and cheese
Red sun caressed rings
You safe rest

 

Topped ash-trays
The Pedestals cursing horse heads
Applies in the room

 

Dirty windows
The sun caressed on the table
A fluttering light





Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2007-09-23 at 09:30

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
makes me think of the dreadful deed it is to wake up early in the morning lol :)

since you mention this in stanza three, i hope you won't mind my side-tracking for a minute :) you know, before last year, i didn't know about marmalade and cheese being a common combination (it isn't here :) ) - i was told it is a popular food in sweden... maybe you know this 'cause i can't seem to trace its roots... where does it originate from? from sweden or did sweden somehow in history get introduced to it? :) that's my mind for you, i'm curious about stuff like that :)

i enjoyed the layout and the picture... really made the ambiance feel like a drowsy, slow awakening mind trying to think and come back to earth from dreamland - i relate to the feeling lol very nice poem :) *hugs* xx
2007-09-23