sometimes you can convince yourself that the feelins are real when everything points in the opposite direction...........
you physically move on...but in reality you never actually do......


committed

Committed is my mind
Suspended in a trance
a source of all confusion
...complete turbulance

Restricted are my eyes
Forced to go astray
to rest upon a silhouette
of your body far away

Confused are my thoughts
My emotions deep inside
rages at the equation
"love never dies"

Tempted are my hands
And my feet that are apart
apart from you the one i love
ever since the very start

But reliable is my heart
Although in greusome pain
that would always live on
....committed in vain




Poetry by jay
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Written on 2007-10-03 at 17:11

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Will
Great Write!!

Great Flow!!
2007-10-03