Changing Worlds

The worlds changing
It's falling apart
To fast.
She tries to fix it
Trying to hard
Nothings happening
It's falling apart.
Alone, She tries
She'll never manage
Someone help her
It's dying.



Poetry by lost
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Written on 2007-10-16 at 16:21

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Rob Graber
Needs a little editing, but this is very well-conceived and provocative, with a wonderfully ambiguous title: Is the poem about THE world? HER world? Both?
2007-10-16