trains diverging




nothing and yet
a scent of roses
white flakes of snow

footsteps leading on
and your scar
so touchable lately

trains diverging
tracks changing

raindrops cold down my spine
your name written
an echo in my mind

and a whisper from my heart



Poetry by kath
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Written on 2007-10-20 at 22:14

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lifescholar
What does it all mean?
2007-10-22


weirdzarun
Rain drops down my spine... what amazing imagery and sensation. Truly masterful work here. Very Good Work.
2007-10-22


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
Such a soulful message poignantly delivered and felt. A wonderful piece.
2007-10-22


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
This poem is so full of a deply etched love for someone so dear to you
and you express it so beautifully
this phraseespecially hits home

footsteps leading on
and your scar
so touchable lately

well done rgds Mike
2007-10-20