unknown




grey .. do you feel it
thightning round us
the formal words

a polite touch
clouds running over towns we never knew

me folding into you
in a memory gone
and the weight of us

floating in a world unknown now



Poetry by kath
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Written on 2007-10-21 at 19:41

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lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Ha the eternal dilema i guess
'And tell me what do we do about us'?

well you could alway love in silence and kiss in the rain

But katherine this is a beautiful poem and evocative of the dilema of a love one might think unrequited yet which in reality is not at all well done on the imagery especially this one

me folding into you
in a memory gone
and the weight of us

rgds mike
2007-10-21