Would You?

Would you hear me if I called your name?
Would you care to see and turn?
Would you notice that it's me?
This love we shared
Are fading away
The Visions
Are disappearing.
The Memories are dieing
I hear no screaming
No saving.
This room
This place
Broken Bones had come into place.

Would you hear me if I called your name?
Would you care to see and turn?
Would you notice that it's me?
The love
The visions
The Memories
Make my tears fall
On broken bones
No healing for them.
The breath I take, one last time
Hurts like hell
I'm Falling apart



Poetry by lost
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Written on 2007-10-24 at 14:55

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Joe Fern
a very powerful piece of poetry you have here.
Loss is a dull pain, its not like a cut or a blow from a fist, more of a sickness sometimes. this is very well expressed here.

Peace,
joe
2007-10-24