inspired by a comment from N


minimalism



a well of anguish
raging torrential beneath
this broken teardrop





Poetry by la tristesse
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Written on 2007-11-05 at 20:05

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Rob Graber
Great use of nature as metaphor for emotion; perfect for haiku!
2007-11-05


Zoya Zaidi
Yeah, a tear drop contains an ocean of emotiobns in it!
Well written, dear la tristesse!
(((Hugs)))
Love,
Zoya
2007-11-05